My Life Is More Than a Crooked Line

The trails I’ve trodden are a twisting vine,
Retracing the steps I want to make right,
But my life is more than a crooked line.

Ascending in search of unvarnished sign,
Clearing the forest to gain line of sight;
The trails I’ve trodden are a twisting vine.

I’m more of a patina than a shine,
A bland cover on an unfinished write,
But my life is more than a crooked line.

Blurring the vision between right and wine,
Quaffed adventures soar to dizzying heights.
The trails I’ve trodden are a twisting vine.

A sober look at the life that is mine
Reveals that I’m not a bright shining knight,
But my life is more than a crooked line.

The good and bad don’t easily entwine;
This epic battle should be met with might.
The trails I’ve trodden are a twisting vine,
But my life is more than a crooked line.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Callus Avatar
May 1, 2022 at 9:59 AM
A most delightful Villanelle, MD. The title is very appropriate: life is more than just a crooked line! ~ Regards // paul
Johnson Avatar
May 4, 2022 at 7:44 AM
Thank you Paul. Appreciate your kind expressions. —MDJ
Hankins Avatar
April 30, 2022 at 10:36 AM
MD, this is a really fine, well-crafted villanelle. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.
Johnson Avatar
April 30, 2022 at 11:07 AM
Thank you Milton. You have always been very kind and generous with your comments. Much appreciated. — MDJ
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