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Yes it is a very nice Globe,

now get your hand off my ass!

In vacuums You don't assume a sonic boom You stay quiet. My cranium echoes a hum that leaves me numb to your edit. 4~12~2014 Maurice Yvonne Sponsor: nette onclaud Contest Name: DESIDERATA (Number 1) 1…” Remember what peace there may be in silence.”

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Date: 12/7/2014 1:53:00 PM
An interesting take!
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Date: 12/5/2014 9:12:00 PM
hahaha, yes, I see what you added . GREAT pic. where do you come up with these things?
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Date: 12/5/2014 7:27:00 PM
Well done Maurice. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 12/5/2014 1:27:00 AM
You nailed this one my friend - I've only just started on it - great write good luck:-) Hugs Jan x
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Date: 12/5/2014 12:26:00 AM
Wow amazing Maurice! I m yet to work on this ! Gl in contest!
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Date: 12/4/2014 11:01:00 PM
Witty, loved this one Maurice. Don't you find we are getting way too politically correct these days? Other day I was driving by a Mental Hospital and the sign outside said "May contain Nuts"
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Date: 12/4/2014 10:39:00 PM
There is strength in this silence...gl
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Date: 12/4/2014 10:17:00 PM
You did really well with that form. Gosh, you are just guns blazing today with poetry. wish I could keep up with you!!!
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