Maurice Yvonne Poet Verse

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Yes it is a very nice Globe,

now get your hand off my ass!

My Life In An Asylum

In vacuums
You don't assume
a sonic boom
You stay quiet.

My cranium
echoes a hum
that leaves me numb
to your edit.  

4~12~2014
Maurice Yvonne
Sponsor: nette onclaud
Contest Name: DESIDERATA (Number 1)
1…” Remember what peace there may be in silence.”

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Terry O'Leary December 7, 2014 at 1:53 PM An interesting take!

Andrea Dietrich December 5, 2014 at 9:12 PM hahaha, yes, I see what you added . GREAT pic. where do you come up with these things?

Brenda Meier-Hans December 5, 2014 at 7:27 PM Well done Maurice. Good luck in the contest.

Jan Allison December 5, 2014 at 1:27 AM You nailed this one my friend - I've only just started on it - great write good luck:-) Hugs Jan x

Dr. Upma A. Sharma December 5, 2014 at 12:26 AM Wow amazing Maurice! I m yet to work on this ! Gl in contest!

Arthur Vaso December 4, 2014 at 11:01 PM Witty, loved this one Maurice. Don't you find we are getting way too politically correct these days? Other day I was driving by a Mental Hospital and the sign outside said "May contain Nuts"

Tim Smith December 4, 2014 at 10:39 PM There is strength in this silence...gl

Andrea Dietrich December 4, 2014 at 10:17 PM You did really well with that form. Gosh, you are just guns blazing today with poetry. wish I could keep up with you!!!