Jack Ellison Poet Couplet

My Life In a Blip

In spite of my extremely good looks
(lol) Still gotta play by the books

No jumping ahead in the line
Each gets their turn everything's fine

Not always hunky-dory though
The ups the downs just take life slow

There ain't no hurry it'll all get done
Take time out for having a little fun

When your time is up and finally over
There'll be nothing but fields of clover
  
Time for good-byes wishing you the best
That completes it as I'm laid to rest

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Speaks Volumes November 25, 2022 at 12:08 AM Ignore the blips my friend. You are way too full of life to think of fields of clover ! You have years of happiness to spread, I ask you seriously... what would Poetry Soup be... Without Happy Jack To answer everyone back.... in his jovial humorous style,,, knowing he is wearing that cheeky smile!... Jack Ellison November 25, 2022 at 5:15 AM "cheeky" smile!... (grin) Can you see it all the way from Aussieland? WOW! XOX

L Milton Hankins November 22, 2022 at 9:52 AM I like this, Jack. I see impatient people all the time, especially in doctor's waiting rooms. Although they are running behind, I'm sure they will give these people all the time they need. I learned patience in the military, and it has stood me in good stead my entire life. Besides, I can take a quick nap almost anywhere! Jack Ellison November 22, 2022 at 12:53 PM Like you, I am a very patience man... however my wife is not! I'm forever trying to calm her down! LOL

Tom Cunningham November 22, 2022 at 6:40 AM I'll say it again, you're in contract, you cant leave just yet lol. Tom Jack Ellison November 22, 2022 at 7:58 AM I ain't going nowhere my good friend! My contract isn't up for another ten years or so LOL

Demetrios Trifiatis November 22, 2022 at 6:29 AM How delightfully witty and profound writing, my dearest x Montrealer friend, Jack! We know each other for over a decade now. Please, stick around for a few more decades. The soup will be with no...taste without you! Blessings! Jack Ellison November 22, 2022 at 7:55 AM The soup will still have two Montreals to content with! LOL How's your day moving along... well I hope! Cheers!