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My Life Goes Round and Round

My life goes round and round, like a carousel at an amusement park, an endless ride of ups and downs, smiling one minute followed by frowns. My life goes round and round, like a carousel at an amusement park, days, weeks, months and years, spin before my eyes with floating tears. My life goes round and round, like a carousel at an amusement park, dizziness occurs from all the blur, as the calliope music is a slur. My life goes round and round, like a carousel at an amusement park, once it stops at the end of day, I am at rest and not feeling fray. March 23, 2018.

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Date: 4/3/2018 9:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Sonia, great alliteration. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Sonia Walker
Date: 4/3/2018 9:51:00 PM
Eve, fun fun fun to write. I appreciate your thoughtfulness. ~ Sonia
Date: 4/2/2018 8:52:00 PM
Sonia, some days it feels like I'm going 'round and round' in circles.. I enjoyed your wonderfully expressive alliteration. Congratulations on your fine win. Warmest wishes..
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Sonia Walker
Date: 4/2/2018 9:15:00 PM
Susan, thank you for your positive reply. Sometimes our lives are like carousels. Have a great week. ~ Sonia
Date: 4/1/2018 3:15:00 PM
- The winners are named and it was great to see your poem on the winning list - Congratulations, Sonia :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Sonia Walker
Date: 4/1/2018 3:40:00 PM
Anne-Lise your encouragement is sincerely appreciated. Thank you, Sonia.
Date: 4/1/2018 3:07:00 PM
Great take on the contest Sonia, just thought it could have done with a little more alliteration to finish higher.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest...
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Sonia Walker
Date: 4/1/2018 3:41:00 PM
Silent One, I enjoy writing alliterations. Thank you for the placement. ~ Sonia
Date: 3/23/2018 8:59:00 PM
Life can sure seem like this at times. Nicely done
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Sonia Walker
Date: 3/23/2018 9:19:00 PM
Chris, thank you for your thoughtful comment. ~ Sonia