Dana S Poet Fibonacci

My Life, As It Were

I
am
in love. 
Now pregnant.
Getting married soon.
Married now, having a baby.
Long time for labor, stress, beautiful baby boy, home now.
First week home, tensions run higher.
Lots of fighting now.
Wondering,
if it's
right.

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Carol Sunshine Brown August 4, 2011 at 8:13 AM Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest. I wish you the best in the final round Dana. Love, Carol

Mickey White July 26, 2011 at 9:49 PM Your simple and honest poem moved me, and brought back powerful, forgotten memories.

Richard Moriarty July 25, 2011 at 3:30 PM seems to me this is somewhat like what my daughter said...everything backwards, but what a learning lesson...a lifetime to forward to...your writing is so on point....congratulations for having a featured poem...and thank you for your efforts, Rich

Carol Sunshine Brown July 25, 2011 at 1:44 PM Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Dana. Love, Carol

Dana S December 23, 2010 at 4:42 PM I know. I get that now. :)

Dr.Ram Mehta December 23, 2010 at 4:40 PM Introspective thoughts happiness and pain you have penned. But that's life. Dana