Christina Vasquez Poet Couplet

My Life As Cupid

As cupid peeks threw my window today
I sit and imagine my life his way

Even though I have no good aim
I picture my life not ever the same

Oh how I know he has such a great heart
My life as he would have fallen apart

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Chris Yarnell March 28, 2009 at 1:23 PM i wold love to be cupid nice write christina

Anna Mayall February 17, 2009 at 11:10 AM i like.....and i think it would be hard liveing life as cupid

Carolyn Devonshire February 14, 2009 at 8:31 PM Christina, cupid's aim is always unpredictable. In fact, I he just shoots from the heart as you do in this great poem. Carolyn

Christopher Higgins February 13, 2009 at 7:08 PM I would love to know why all your letters are captialized..what is going on in the author's head...enjoyable read.

Elizabeth Neal February 12, 2009 at 2:42 PM NIce work. This is really good Cupid works in mysterious ways. Love Elizabeth

Arany P. February 12, 2009 at 2:23 AM the flow of emotions went rhyming!! nice one... ~ Arany

Raul Moreno February 11, 2009 at 8:55 PM Nice couplet Christina, I hope your Poetry Soup experience is a good one. I have a friend that capitalizes all of his letter too. His name is Tyler Martin he's new to the soup too...Raul