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My Life As Cupid

As cupid peeks threw my window today I sit and imagine my life his way Even though I have no good aim I picture my life not ever the same Oh how I know he has such a great heart My life as he would have fallen apart

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Chris Yarnell

Date: 3/28/2009 1:23:00 PM

i wold love to be cupid nice write christina

Anna Mayall

Date: 2/17/2009 11:10:00 AM

i like.....and i think it would be hard liveing life as cupid

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/14/2009 8:31:00 PM

Christina, cupid's aim is always unpredictable. In fact, I he just shoots from the heart as you do in this great poem. Carolyn

Christopher Higgins

Date: 2/13/2009 7:08:00 PM

I would love to know why all your letters are captialized..what is going on in the author's head...enjoyable read.

Elizabeth Neal

Date: 2/12/2009 2:42:00 PM

NIce work. This is really good Cupid works in mysterious ways. Love Elizabeth

Arany P.

Date: 2/12/2009 2:23:00 AM

the flow of emotions went rhyming!! nice one... ~ Arany

Raul Moreno

Date: 2/11/2009 8:55:00 PM

Nice couplet Christina, I hope your Poetry Soup experience is a good one. I have a friend that capitalizes all of his letter too. His name is Tyler Martin he's new to the soup too...Raul