Jessica Thompson Poet Rhyme

My Life

The first ring he ever gave, 

it turned my finger green 

but it meant a lot anyway 

I wish you could have seen. 

 

It feels like the years flew by, 

and they are moving fast 

though we had some bumps 

our love just seems to last. 

 

It happened very differently, 

our meeting a little odd 

Paths destined to cross 

Because of the man called God. 

 

 

I am grateful for this love, 

This perfect match for me 

And the little miracles 

That I get to see.

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Ugwu Cornelius Chidera June 25, 2014 at 2:02 AM this poem is interesting,God had done alot for you.nice poem Jess Jessica Thompson June 25, 2014 at 2:07 PM Sometimes my words get mixed, but what I was meaning is..Though I don't go to church, I do believe in God. I am not some person who preaches to others, hell, I have my own faults. Jessica Thompson June 25, 2014 at 2:06 PM Thank you Cornel, Yes God has done a lot for me, though sometimes I wonder how I deserve it. Believe me when I say, I don't go to church and think I am some super Christian lol, but I do believe in God and his miracles. Glad you enjoyed this poem. Take care my friend, Jess

Arthur Vaso June 24, 2014 at 8:40 PM Wow, loved this, you have great style, not sure if you read any by Casarah, but you may like if you haven't!!!! Cheers Jessica Thompson June 24, 2014 at 9:09 PM Thank you Arthur. I actually have read stuff by Casarah, in fact, she is one of my favs on here. Glad you enjoyed this piece my friend. Take care, Jess

Pandita Sietesantos June 24, 2014 at 6:52 PM This is such a wonderful, inspirational, heartfelt write - love it! Warmest regards to you, my friend, Jessica. Jessica Thompson June 24, 2014 at 7:02 PM Thank you Pandita, you are always so kind about my work. I am glad you liked this piece. Take care friend, Jess :)

Leon Enriquez June 24, 2014 at 6:39 PM Dear Jessica: The voice in your heart is vivid. Keep writing. Leon Jessica Thompson June 24, 2014 at 7:02 PM Thank you Leon, I am very glad you liked this piece. I appreciate your warm comments. Take care Friend, Jess