My Life

My life is so perfect and true 
With you my love,
Noone else treats me the way you do.

My step-father treats me wrong, and blames everything on me,
Which makes me explode or say some things to people that I don't mean,
My mother is awesome, and she is my best friend, the only other one I can trust, except you.

I have never really loved anyone before you, except my friends, but never as much as you, my love. 

I can't imagine living in a world where you don't exsist,
If I had to I would'nt do it, I would die,
I just can't be without you more than 24 hours, I am glad we are in the same school, that way when I am grounded I can still see you, 
I dream and daydream about you every day and every night, 
I want you to cloud up my mind, so I can think of nothing else.
My life is simple, perfect, and true.

There are some people that I wished I could say sorry to for my behavior towards them, but I don't think they would listen,
It eats my stomach up, and I feel bad for my behavior towards them, but I know I can't go into the past and erase it, guess I just have to live though it,
It just puts more scars in my heart, because no matter what we are all family in God's eyes.

I can not hate, Dislike, or even Strongly dislike anyone, even though they don't like me or may hate me, I think of them as family. So I will say sorry to someone I go to school with, she deserves it. I have 3 periods with her, so I will say sorry someday when I get the guts.

My life is so perfect, clear and safe to me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 9/26/2011 11:15:00 AM
I seriously love this poem. I remember the day I wrote this, It still makes me cry sometimes, and I also have four poem notebooks, and I am going to put them all in here. :)
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Date: 9/2/2011 2:37:00 PM
sooner better then later
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Briana Lynn Minard-Adler
Date: 9/26/2011 11:16:00 AM
Yeah, I still haven't had the gut to tell her yet, I am kind of scared of her, she is very intimidating, but the longer I wait, the more pain it causes me. Oh, what to do, what to do?
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