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My Life

Another old poem i found... ENJOY! In a place where pain is the main goal and hurting is the main sport, In a place where friends turn to knives and stab you in the back. There’s a place like this it’s sad to say, There’s a place like this… it’s called my life. In the place where I don’t matter, In the place where no one cares. It’s a hard place to live and it’s sad to say…that place is called my life. The life I live everyday, it isn’t worth the pain. One day I’ll escape it all, I will kill myself and die. I’ll be happier when I’m dead, As well as everyone else. No one needs me here, I’m just a waste of space. It’s sad to say but this is true in a place called my life.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/28/2010 7:05:00 PM
julian, i get what you mean by varied... i will deffinatly think about trying to do some different poems but i usually turn to writing when i am feeling like self harming so the feelings are not usually happy ones. but thank you for reading, i hope you enjoy some of my other poems.
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Date: 4/28/2010 6:29:00 PM
long live the emotional poetry, i like the imagery i would love to read other poems. it's good to keep the vibe of poetry varied but i enjoy reading the words of someone truly hurt feeling is all you have sometimes please share it with us again.-julian
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Date: 4/28/2010 5:43:00 PM
This feeling rings true in all of us at some point in our lives I believe. I know the pain of feeling worthless, but there are some good people in this world and not ones that will stab you in the back. Terrific poem.
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