My Legacy

I suppose,
in time I may shine.
Poetic
styling will
guide my chosen destiny.
Words my legacy.

Just trying a new style: Shadoma, six line, 3,5,3,3,7,5
Hope you like it. Judy

on writing and wordsi do not know?

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Kim M

April 17, 2010 at 12:23 AM

Cool! I'm impressed with your diversity in trying the new form, and with the fine result you achieved! Nice job! I wonder if you will choose to try more of these shadomas!

John Beam

March 4, 2010 at 1:17 PM

keep smiln while you are styln Jesus loves you

John Beam

February 20, 2010 at 7:01 PM

thnk you for comment have good evening

Carolyn Devonshire

January 13, 2010 at 9:53 AM

You have captured the dream of poets, to have their written words serve as a shining legacy. And I like this new verse form very much. You work very well in it! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 13, 2010 at 7:14 AM

I enjoyed reading your poetry today Judy. Please continue to share your writing with us. I wish you the best with life and your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol

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