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"my Legacy"

O master! Will, what thou craves for me! The forsaken life is a praise for me Tranquility resides in heart to see The wonders in store thou hath for me O fire! Retire! And Spare The Free! Save if you would the flare for me Endurance is my bride, sustenance the key That is all perhaps there is to me I am but a legend. There is no truth to me And that indeed is my legacy

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Beata Agustin

Date: 12/9/2024 7:10:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/16/2016 11:35:00 PM

Habib Effendi, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing you're poetry. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 1/14/2016 11:05:00 PM

HABIB, Awesome write, I really like this. Forever ** SKAT **

Mohammad Yamin

Date: 12/1/2009 10:18:00 AM

Habib, this poem has good thoughts. Pleasant in reading. Has clarity of thoughts. However, there is room for editing. Perhaps avoiding repeatation of 'for me' in the second line of each verse will raise the standard of the poem. Keep writing. You have not posted a poem in the past four months. I urge you to read my poem My Departed Friends. -Mohammad Yamin

Edward Orozco

Date: 7/4/2009 11:25:00 PM

Nice write!- jereamiahha