My Last Star

My love for you is great
My love for you is real
My love for you is a greater love
Than Romeo and Juliet

You’ve had my love for a year
You’ve had my heart for longer
You’ve had my days 
You’ve had my nights

You’ve taken me away 
To a place I never knew
A place where I want to be
A place where we’ll grow 
Like flowers in spring

My love is for you
My love is real
My love will last 
Until the stars aren’t seen....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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January 3, 2012 at 5:53 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Mary. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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January 1, 2012 at 6:23 AM
Hi Mary and welcome to POetry Soup. This poem is a great start. I wish you well an dhope you find joy here at Poetry Soup. Jancarl
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December 30, 2011 at 8:55 AM
Mary welcome to the soup, great start you have here..David
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December 30, 2011 at 7:21 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Mary. This is a great site to post your poems, receive encouragement and be inspired by other poets. Be sure to read and comment on other writer's work and they will do the same for you. Wishing you all the best, Kim
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December 29, 2011 at 2:26 PM
Love sweet love.....sweet poem Mary. HAPPY NEW YEAR TO YOU ! And welcome PoetrySoup. OXOX love from Anne-Lise
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