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My Last Star

My love for you is great My love for you is real My love for you is a greater love Than Romeo and Juliet You’ve had my love for a year You’ve had my heart for longer You’ve had my days You’ve had my nights You’ve taken me away To a place I never knew A place where I want to be A place where we’ll grow Like flowers in spring My love is for you My love is real My love will last Until the stars aren’t seen....

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/3/2012 5:53:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Mary. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

Jancarl Campi

Date: 1/1/2012 6:23:00 AM

Hi Mary and welcome to POetry Soup. This poem is a great start. I wish you well an dhope you find joy here at Poetry Soup. Jancarl

David Williams

Date: 12/30/2011 8:55:00 AM

Mary welcome to the soup, great start you have here..David

Kim Merryman

Date: 12/30/2011 7:21:00 AM

Welcome to Poetry Soup, Mary. This is a great site to post your poems, receive encouragement and be inspired by other poets. Be sure to read and comment on other writer's work and they will do the same for you. Wishing you all the best, Kim

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/29/2011 2:26:00 PM

Love sweet love.....sweet poem Mary. HAPPY NEW YEAR TO YOU ! And welcome PoetrySoup. OXOX love from Anne-Lise