My Last Request

The efforts made of this dying man
Seem vain, at best, indeed
For still I thirst, I hunger more
I cannot stop, I bleed
I feel I’m fading ever fast
Into the darkness, strong
I yearn to wander in the light
Of which, I do belong

Oh, gracious sun and present moon
Shine light upon my brow
Do guide me back from death I ask
Please let me live somehow
My request is simple, yet complex
Just give me some more light
I do not wish to die this day
Nor, during this cold night
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Pig Knuckles Avatar
July 15, 2008 at 10:50 AM
Michael, you have such a way with words that draw your readers into you and allow them to feel the emotions going into your creative works. Excellent Job My Friend. MPK
Jordan Avatar
July 15, 2008 at 7:42 AM
Live on and stay strong bro - each new day is a blessing to behold - excellent rhyme and flow - God bless
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