My Last Breath

My last breath,
that is all I want to take,
wont have to worry about messing up,
wont have to worry about being good enough.
I am good for nothing, that is how you make me
feel, can't make you happy...
can't wait to take my last breath.
Who will miss me when I am no longer around,
you won't here me "complain" because I will
not make a sound.
Will you miss me when you can't see my face
or go on with your life, would you miss me anyway?
My last breath,
that is all I want to take,
be some where in the clouds,
then would you be happy when I 
am not around.
Then there would be nothing
that could be said,
when I take my last breath.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

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