My Last Breath

WHY YOU HIT ME WHY YOU HURT 
I'VE NEVER DONE ANYTHING TO 
AND YOU BUT TRY TO 
LOVE YOU. AND PUNCH ME IN MY 
HEAD AND MAKE ME GO TO BED 
SOMETIMES I WISH I 
WAS DEAD THE LOVE THAT A 
MOTHER HAVE FOR THERE CHILD IS 
NOT SO STRONG WHEN 
THEY DON'T WONT TO COME HOME 
YOU RUN ALL MY FRIENDS AWAY 
BECAUSE THEY TRY TO 
HELP ME GET AWAY YOU SALE 
EVERYTHING THAT YOU TOUCH I 
JUST HOPE YOU DONT GIVE 
ME UP THE TIME HAS CAME SO I 
CANT FEEL ANYMORE PAIN SO I'LL 
TAKE MY LAST BREATH 
TO SAY I LOVE YOU.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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August 8, 2009 at 4:37 AM
Rosia - Where would one even start to comment on this poem - I used to be a very violent man both out here in life and inside of Prison then one day in the SHU the Lord came unto me and all that was taken away - My life with my wife and daughter is so very blessed - I hope with all my heart at some point you are able to find a world free of all the violence as I have - I'll keep you in my prayers - God Bless, MJ
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August 7, 2009 at 3:25 PM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Rosia. I am wishing you the very best in your writing. Love, Carol
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