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My Last Breath

WHY YOU HIT ME WHY YOU HURT I'VE NEVER DONE ANYTHING TO AND YOU BUT TRY TO LOVE YOU. AND PUNCH ME IN MY HEAD AND MAKE ME GO TO BED SOMETIMES I WISH I WAS DEAD THE LOVE THAT A MOTHER HAVE FOR THERE CHILD IS NOT SO STRONG WHEN THEY DON'T WONT TO COME HOME YOU RUN ALL MY FRIENDS AWAY BECAUSE THEY TRY TO HELP ME GET AWAY YOU SALE EVERYTHING THAT YOU TOUCH I JUST HOPE YOU DONT GIVE ME UP THE TIME HAS CAME SO I CANT FEEL ANYMORE PAIN SO I'LL TAKE MY LAST BREATH TO SAY I LOVE YOU.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/8/2009 4:37:00 AM
Rosia - Where would one even start to comment on this poem - I used to be a very violent man both out here in life and inside of Prison then one day in the SHU the Lord came unto me and all that was taken away - My life with my wife and daughter is so very blessed - I hope with all my heart at some point you are able to find a world free of all the violence as I have - I'll keep you in my prayers - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 8/7/2009 3:25:00 PM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Rosia. I am wishing you the very best in your writing. Love, Carol
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