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My knees go weak

Oh, how can I resist?
Luscious chocolaty creaminess presented with such allure.
My diet starts... tomorrow morning !



Wordku: 5-7-5 words
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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De Beaulieu Avatar
February 12, 2026 at 10:49 AM
Hello Lin, What type of a dessert is this? I felt i needed to taste it. did you make it? Now I am in the mood for chocolate. Hugs. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 13, 2026 at 3:53 PM
Hello Lin, my husband use to make chocolate truffles. He made extra for us to enjy. Yum! I miss them. Hugs. /Darlene/
Gauthier Avatar
February 13, 2026 at 2:18 PM
lol ~ it makes me think of trifle ~ I love trifle but have never had a chocolate one ! Talk about decadent !!
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