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My Judas

when my thoughts trail down those wooded paths we tread, i wonder what there was to see in you other than the beauty of any beast wisdom dictates never befriend physical attraction nothing is expected of friendship other than the love it is analysis, fools rush in, live, and learn you saw in me a kindness to your needs someone on whom you could depend, moments when the soul lies distraught the world walks on by, as i have learned then for some reason, perhaps an innate evil lurking in all of us my kindness you perceived, a weakness this did not leave me, bright position prognosis, this too shall pass in this discourse, leaves have fallen winter always takes its toll yet spring returns, life begins anew yes there are frail branches in the strength of this tree they have learned to bend let go, survive my judas find your salvation therein Phoenix 87 The Patient Stones

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Date: 8/3/2022 6:43:00 PM
Hi Timothy, thanks for guiding me here, to this poetic gem, How one's kindness is seen as a one's frailties can leave one wide open, its all here, think i've been down that road.
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Timothy Ray
Date: 8/4/2022 5:52:00 AM
that is an axiom we all swallow at sometime...my poem "waiting in the silence" is a limn of an individual i watched work the tourists in Mexico....
Date: 7/10/2022 2:56:00 PM
Harry’s piece was a punch in the gut, this is an arrow through the heart… pure pain in poetic form. Well written Timothy.
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Timothy Ray
Date: 7/10/2022 3:53:00 PM
thank you Mark....

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