My Jimmy Choos

a chatter and a natter as we walk past a plain old shop window I walk straight on, took no notice hang on, back track I go Oh my god sis, look at them the world's most awesome shoes look ordinary to me she says your kidding, there Jimmy Choos now this was not your average shop words thrift above the door the price tag still two hundred dollars cut me to the core my thinking cap it went straight on ideas bouncing around I'm going in, I have a plan it should work out quite sound excuse me miss I'll volunteer I act all coy and meek that's very nice of you my dear you get discount in six week I looked at Jimmy's once again the deal I had to do day after day I trudged along the six week I got through my day had come, quarter price to me the work, the strain, the torment as I slipped in my aching feet it was worth every bleedin moment
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Devonshire Avatar
May 12, 2010 at 7:36 AM
Those must have been awesome shoes, Carolyne. Glad the shoes were still there when the sale began, but it's a shame your feet were aching when you put them on. You gave me a big smile with this witty poem! Love, Carolyn
Culverhouse Avatar
May 12, 2010 at 3:53 AM
very nice, got you sucked right in, lol funny
Nutter Avatar
May 12, 2010 at 3:18 AM
Very funny write, It was worth reading this poem and receiving a laugh at the end.
Segal Avatar
May 12, 2010 at 2:55 AM
Ha hA! very amusing! enjoyed by Simone
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