My Jack-F

Duly respected by others of his kind.
Deeply loved by me, my family, and friends.

He was more than a TV star like Rin Tin Tin.
His name wasn’t Lassie, but he too was smart.

He was surely a family member and a friend.
My dad gave him to me when he was just a pup.

He loved to play, run, jump, and ride in daddy’s truck.
I loved baseball, mama’s peach pies and black eyed peas.

He didn’t pick fights, but could hold his own against any dog.
He was my protector, my dearest friend; O I loved him so.

I had lots of friends, but none compared with “My Jack”.
Sadly, one day Jack came hopping and barely made it back.

Jack was shot for trespassing in a mean man’s cotton field.
Tough as nails, but his wounds were too severe to be healed.

He didn’t have to shoot my Jack! But back then, animals had no rights.
Perhaps he never considered the pain to Jack, nor to those who loved him dearly.

My Jack was gone, tragically torn from his loving home; but he was never alone.  My whole family mourned, as we lay Jack to rest under a tree in our front yard.

I suspect that my heart for personal pets died that day and was buried with My Jack. But some 30 years later, my wife and I bought our kids a Collie and called him Jack.

06042016PSCtest, Beloved Pets.BJ Legros Kelly
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Legros Kelley Avatar
March 27, 2023 at 12:23 AM
Thank you for entering this poetry contest Curtis, and congratulations on your high placing win! :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 7, 2016 at 1:40 AM
This is such a heartfelt story for the beloved pet you lost. Maybe Jack sent you his friend until you could be togethrer again. Congratulations on your wonderful win! #7 ; )
Johnson Avatar
June 7, 2016 at 9:51 AM
Thanks Connie for your kind comments.
Gupta Avatar
June 4, 2016 at 8:19 PM
A moving poem... a piece of pulse remains with Jack...
Johnson Avatar
June 4, 2016 at 10:49 PM
Very nice comment and deeply appreciated. Thanks Probir.
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