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My Inner Thoughts

Way deep down inside of me Where the survival instincts lay The place in my subconscious Where the id and libido play Where my nature and my spirit Weave the fabric of my soul Where the inner thoughts inside of me Ultimately set my goal Where my rhyme meets my meter And my thoughts I do conceive I wonder if I’ve done enough Before I take my leave

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/21/2012 12:31:00 PM
great poem! i love the line "where my rhyme meets my meter" - very clever! wonderful ending, too!
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Date: 3/21/2012 11:17:00 AM
there's something about this write that slays my soul, joe... a deep melody " before i take my leave..".. beautiful!.. thank you for appreciating my contest piece for you... all the best woth huggs!:)
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Date: 3/21/2012 3:54:00 AM
This is very nice Joe.Enjoyed the read.
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