My Inner Thoughts

Way deep down inside of me
Where the survival instincts lay
The place in my subconscious
Where the id and libido play

Where my nature and my spirit
Weave the fabric of my soul
Where the inner thoughts inside of me
Ultimately set my goal

Where my rhyme meets my meter
And my thoughts I do conceive
I wonder if I’ve done enough
Before I take my leave
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Bauer Avatar
March 21, 2012 at 12:31 PM
great poem! i love the line "where my rhyme meets my meter" - very clever! wonderful ending, too!
Onclaud Avatar
March 21, 2012 at 11:17 AM
there's something about this write that slays my soul, joe... a deep melody " before i take my leave..".. beautiful!.. thank you for appreciating my contest piece for you... all the best woth huggs!:)
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March 21, 2012 at 3:54 AM
This is very nice Joe.Enjoyed the read.
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