Dinda Minardi Poet Senryu

My In-Law

He rolls like baby
Playing hearts like he's ready
To lose his deary

Your bro not that boy
Played my heart like it's a toy
You're pain, he's a joy

My brother-in-law
If no heart wants you, then how?
Grow up will you now!

Prima Minardi (05/19/2011)

For '***IN-LAWS***' contest
By Dr. Ram Mehta

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Andrea Dietrich January 30, 2012 at 8:37 PM Hey, I am just now seeing your in-law poem and that you won. WAY to go. a very belated congratulations to you. I see you don't like your brother in law? What about your mother in law?

John Freeman June 8, 2011 at 8:21 PM Prima, good to see you in the winner's circle. Agape, Moses

Carol Sunshine Brown June 8, 2011 at 10:21 AM Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's contest Prima. Love, Carol

Wilma Neels June 7, 2011 at 9:47 AM Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's contest, Prima ;)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 6, 2011 at 3:57 PM congrats Prima on your exciting win in Dr. Ram's contest on in laws with this fabulous entry my friend.. super cool..enjoy another great win with luv.

Dr.Ram Mehta June 6, 2011 at 3:23 PM Congratulations on the tenth place win in my contest, Prima

Gwendolen Song May 30, 2011 at 2:15 PM Hi Prima- Such childish behavior from your in law in this entry. The last line is peachy keen--Grow up will you now. How perfect an ending for your in law! Have a blessed Memorial Day. Gwendolen

Nette Onclaud May 24, 2011 at 3:37 AM impressive insight about the role of in-laws in your life, prima.. this is so original... winning wishes to you! :) huggs, nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 23, 2011 at 8:48 PM I wonder if men ever grow up Prima.. your lines are so cool and expressive ..good luck in the contest luv.. super write..

Dr.Ram Mehta May 23, 2011 at 3:30 PM Thanks for the entry, Prima