My Ink

Father please touch me
As I come to you my Lord
Truly I feel love
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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May 29, 2009 at 4:46 PM
Amen! Blessings to you for sharing this faith message with us. Nice use of this short form. Have a good weekend. Karen
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May 26, 2009 at 11:43 AM
very niice=]]TinkBabyy
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May 26, 2009 at 11:09 AM
Thrilling.
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May 26, 2009 at 7:22 AM
And may you be ever healed ... and may you be ever like a river bringing to the rebellious sea ... peace and love, my talented friend.
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May 25, 2009 at 10:51 PM
Short N sweet. Sometimes less is more. Thnx for the feedback. How do I send soup mail?
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May 25, 2009 at 10:20 PM
amen,i feel love to in my lord,no one gives me love the way He does--bravo--charma
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May 25, 2009 at 8:14 PM
You beautifully convey the comfort of appreciating God's love. Very nice senryu style, Jeremiah! Love, Carolyn
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