My Imperfect Side

I have an eagle eye,
The eye that can send you to hell,
Once I watch your moves,
I don't spare your life,
That's my imperfect side,

I judge quickly,
I don't need an explanation,
That's a waste of time,
I quickly lock you up in jail,
I don't care if you rote in hell,
That's my imperfect side,

Don't cook me,
If u r not a good chef,
I don't smile at your food,
I throw it in the bin,
While you wait for a gift - a slap,
That's my imperfect side.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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October 27, 2024 at 6:56 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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May 8, 2017 at 6:59 AM
I sort of like your imperfect side, and that last stanza made me chuckle :) I won't try to cook you! Welcome to PoetrySoup with this well written poem :)
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