My Immortal

My immortal,
My heart,
the blood that runs through my veins,
give me the strength to love.

Things in my dark world,
all belongs to you,
and the way we live today,
is why i want you.

A vampire, an immortal,
you feel me up with bleeding love,
and no one else can be you.
My heart beats faster
because of the thought of you.

Turn me into a vampire like you,
and both of our dreams will come true...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Galua Avatar
June 23, 2010 at 5:02 AM
this must be inspired from twilight...love it...you captured it...^_^ v
Mehta Avatar
June 23, 2010 at 3:41 AM
I enjoyed this poem on my immortal
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