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09/13/2026

September Challenge Tritina

 

Contest by Andrea Dietrich

My Idol Philosopher and Guide

    My father was my Idol, Philosopher and Guide.
     But he was a dominant person always to Control -
     I had regular fight with him on inevitable Clash !

     Imprisoned in childhood owing to daily Clash
     Tired on conflict ! Developed personality yer he was Guide.
    No way, I revolted  to escape from his over -all Control !

    I had to choose my own way getting rid of his Control
    I had to struggle  but I was just fed up on continued Clash.
    Yet alll along I paid due respect to Dad as my Guide.

  Dad was my Guide but I went out of his Control avoiding Clash !
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