My Idea of Heaven

In my idea of heaven
  there would be rolling open plain;
with rich luxurious grasses
  kissed by a gentle rain.
The perfect campsite every evening
  with water cool and sweet
and a nice soft pair of moccasins
  to soothe my tired old feet.
And sunrise every morning
  would be so bright and fair;
I'd linger over morning coffee
  just breathing in the air.
I'd saddle up my faithful horse
  and he'd be eager to go.
Why, I wouldn't need to reign him
  'cause he'd already know.
The trail would be familiar
  for I'd ridden it many times
while reading in the Good Book
  laid out plainly on each line.
For once I crossed those far blue mountains
  I'd finally be coming home;
where my Savior waits to greet me
  beneath God's Great White Throne.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

 Avatar
July 18, 2009 at 5:27 PM
Creative view. Blessings to you for sharing this inspirational poem with us. Congratulations on having it featured. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
Brown Avatar
July 17, 2009 at 4:45 PM
simply beautiful! congrats!
Moreno Avatar
July 14, 2009 at 2:11 PM
Lary, congrats on your feature...Raul
Brown Avatar
July 13, 2009 at 3:33 PM
Lary congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. I am so happy to see you here. Love, Carol
Tugaff Avatar
July 13, 2009 at 8:40 AM
Congratulations on your featured poetry. More power and God bless. Ernilando
Adeite Avatar
July 12, 2009 at 10:44 PM
Wow, Great flow of words, this is a very passionate piece. Congrats on your awesome poem being featured this week. You are an incredible poet, please keep writing. Best wishes with your writings. Adeleke
Brown Avatar
June 29, 2009 at 11:21 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Lary. I am hoping to read many more poems written by you. Love, Carol
 Avatar
June 27, 2009 at 11:59 AM
Just bring on that coffee! Blessings to you for sharing this inspirational poem with us. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace