My Idea of a Miracle

The scientists would find a cure
For all diseases, ailments, ills,
So no one died before their time,
While taking the new wonder pills.

* For Carolyn's Miracle contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
February 27, 2012 at 12:29 PM
Thank you for your kind words on my poetry. It is always a pleasure to read your writings Jack. Love, Carol
Freeman Avatar
December 14, 2011 at 10:18 AM
I know of a wonder pill Jack, but unfortunately, few will believe in it's cure which is required for it to work. Smile. Congrats on your worthy win. Agape, Moses
Haick Avatar
December 13, 2011 at 5:35 PM
Congratulations on a well deserved win, Jack. Merry Christmas! Love, Annalise
Poet Avatar
December 13, 2011 at 12:14 PM
Nice wishes here Jack.Enjoyed your poem.Congrats on your win.
Brown Avatar
December 13, 2011 at 10:37 AM
Congratulations on your super placement in the "Your Christmas Miracle" contest Jack. Love and blessings always, Carol
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 13, 2011 at 10:29 AM
Excellent Congratulations x
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December 13, 2011 at 10:11 AM
Jack, what a worthy miracle it would be to end disease so everyone could live full and happy lives. I admire the way you conveyed your thoughts so concisely in this beautiful rhyme. Congratulations on your win! Love and Christmas blessings, Carolyn
Dietrich Avatar
November 30, 2011 at 10:31 PM
This is the one I WANT TO SEE. My idea of a GREAT miracle, Jack.
Jones Avatar
November 30, 2011 at 6:39 PM
no side effects, either... now THAT would be utopia fo sho. Dig the sentiment, thanks jack, namaste~N
Austin Avatar
November 30, 2011 at 2:20 PM
Isn't the television full of lawyer adds, though. Good write. Love, daver
Song Avatar
November 30, 2011 at 1:32 PM
Hi Jack! Yeah...I like this idea for a Christmas miracle...there have been many exciting developments in the area of cancer research just this year alone. One angle was through genetics and the other is through mushrooms....pretty exciting and PROMISING discoveries. I think your Christmas miracle might just be a real possibility! Gwendolen
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