My Hometown

Oh, quiet village by dark, thick foliage
shielded by trees all through the ages,
to you I return within my memory
from this strange land so far away.

I yearn for the wild fields I used to roam,
to climb rolling slopes at break of dawn,
where tiny creatures play on tiny boughs -
how I miss you, my old hometown.

O'er the ocean, mighty gale, carry me
back where my true love waits for me;
take me again to that familiar harbor
so I will be lonely no more.

There I go where life is mellow and slow,
to that bubbling creek that gently flows,
then daydream on some lazy afternoon -
life is peaceful in my hometown.

In that little chapel on top of a hill,
the great wise spirit talk to Him I will;
up in the clouds I'd be near to heaven
in my sleepy hometown.

My soul submitting, believing once again,
Him to this grateful heart I will gladly let in;
there is truth to discover when I am reborn
in the haven of my hometown.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

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Richards Avatar
November 30, 2008 at 1:08 PM
A hometown that sounds like a great place to remember. Well done, and congratulations on this one being featured this week! ~ Carrie
Jordan Avatar
November 29, 2008 at 9:47 PM
Wilfredo - Congrats on having your poetry featured this week – Great Job & God Bless, MJ
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
November 24, 2008 at 6:22 PM
Congratulations FRed on the featuring of "My Hometown." Hey, ain't that a Springsteen hit. God Bless. Vince
Winter Avatar
November 24, 2008 at 10:50 AM
Fred, this makes me so homesick for you. Such a beautiful write of longing and love for one's home. I am glad they picked this for a feature, one of my favs. Congrats. Love, Shar
Kelly Avatar
November 24, 2008 at 9:26 AM
Wilfredo , great piece , as I drive thro' my old hometown , each morning on my way to work ... Yes , I can relate to the life , I enjoyed there , in those carefree days of youth ....
Brown Avatar
November 24, 2008 at 6:52 AM
Beautiful Outstanding writing. Congratulations Fred for it being featured this week. Love, Carol
Strand Avatar
November 23, 2008 at 11:48 PM
Congrats on your feature write this week Wilfredo.Rgds Brian
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November 23, 2008 at 11:35 PM
Fred, congratulations on your poem being featured this week. Well deserved. Nigel
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