Michael J. Falotico Poet Haiku

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"What my eyes See" contest





                                       the light is my home...
                                   rocks and water, decisions...
                                         stepping cautiously...

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Judy Konos February 27, 2011 at 2:38 PM Very good....

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 25, 2011 at 2:27 PM Wow to u now my W.K.. this is a beautiful way to pose the projection of the photo.. a unique and amazing parallel my friend.. much good luck though this one is brilliant.. Jersey Girl forever with luv always...

Daver Austin February 25, 2011 at 6:09 AM This is a makes-ya-think. Transcendental. daver

Wilma Neels February 25, 2011 at 5:50 AM Quite a unique way to look at the picture Michael, love your entry.. Good luck with it.. Luv W

Kabuteng P.Ink K. February 24, 2011 at 5:25 PM What a beautiful & thought provoking take on the photo, Michael :) wish you the best in the contest :)

Nette Onclaud February 24, 2011 at 12:16 AM this one soars,michael! winning dtreaks to you! very original..:) huggs, nette

Andrea Dietrich February 23, 2011 at 10:22 PM wow, I love how YOU saw the picture!!

Sara Kendrick February 23, 2011 at 4:34 PM Reads like a winner to me..Good luck in the contest..Sara

Sharon Ruebel February 23, 2011 at 3:51 PM Hello Michael, This is a wonderful take on that picture Michael. Have a look see at mine please I love this one, your mind is full of treasures Lov, Shar

Kash Poet February 23, 2011 at 3:21 PM Wonderful Haiku with nice use of metaphors. A great entry into the contest----kashinath