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"What my eyes See" contest the light is my home... rocks and water, decisions... stepping cautiously...

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Judy Konos

Date: 2/27/2011 2:38:00 PM

Very good....

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/25/2011 2:27:00 PM

Wow to u now my W.K.. this is a beautiful way to pose the projection of the photo.. a unique and amazing parallel my friend.. much good luck though this one is brilliant.. Jersey Girl forever with luv always...

Daver Austin

Date: 2/25/2011 6:09:00 AM

This is a makes-ya-think. Transcendental. daver

Wilma Neels

Date: 2/25/2011 5:50:00 AM

Quite a unique way to look at the picture Michael, love your entry.. Good luck with it.. Luv W

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 2/24/2011 5:25:00 PM

What a beautiful & thought provoking take on the photo, Michael :) wish you the best in the contest :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/24/2011 12:16:00 AM

this one soars,michael! winning dtreaks to you! very original..:) huggs, nette

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/23/2011 10:22:00 PM

wow, I love how YOU saw the picture!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/23/2011 4:34:00 PM

Reads like a winner to me..Good luck in the contest..Sara

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 2/23/2011 3:51:00 PM

Hello Michael, This is a wonderful take on that picture Michael. Have a look see at mine please I love this one, your mind is full of treasures Lov, Shar

Kash Poet

Date: 2/23/2011 3:21:00 PM

Wonderful Haiku with nice use of metaphors. A great entry into the contest----kashinath