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My Heavenly Father

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My father and friend guardian above. I know you’re watching as I grow up. Showing me right from wrong, as I walk along. Pushing me down when I mess up. Never do I worry about your hand. For you are always standing there. Sometimes you’re quiet as a mouse. Never would have known you were peering down. Other times you shout like a fog horn ringing loud. When I look to the stars in the darkened sky I know where my answers lie. Deep within myself Is where they can be found. With a little help from my angels all around.
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/9/2011 7:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Paula Swanson's "Who Am I" contest Cory. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/7/2011 11:17:00 AM
Quick congrats before I get logged out again!
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Date: 8/7/2011 6:40:00 AM
hey Cory, top notch win David
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Date: 8/6/2011 8:48:00 PM
Cory, great write. Congrats on your 1st place win. Glenna
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Date: 8/6/2011 9:58:00 AM
CONGRATULATIONS for this well-deserved win~~~~smile~~~~*-*junjun
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Date: 8/6/2011 1:30:00 AM
congrats cory on your first place win with this special inspirational poem my friend.. enjoy top billing luv..
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Date: 7/31/2011 5:40:00 PM
Very nice piece Mr. long. I can see you are indeed in search of the truth.
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Date: 7/31/2011 4:50:00 PM
very beautiful poetry here cory reads like a winner
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Date: 7/30/2011 9:42:00 PM
Lovely devotional expressions, cory
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Date: 7/30/2011 6:50:00 PM
well I always feel my Daddy watching and guiding me from Heaven as he did in life so no matter which realm they live in now cory..they are still loving us and concerned.. a beautiful tribute piece buddy of mine..luv..
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Date: 7/30/2011 5:38:00 PM
A lovely entry for Paula's contest, Cory. Wasn't sure if you were writing about God or your real father whose soul might be in heaven, but it didn't matter. The poem is very touching and I wish you success in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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