My Heaven

A sultry gaze A gentle touch A warm caress Soft full lips Pure ecstasy My heaven
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Vdev Avatar
November 16, 2019 at 8:15 PM
A short read A lovely feel A joy shared Love reading it .
Chiri Avatar
November 16, 2019 at 9:42 PM
I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thank you!;)
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November 16, 2019 at 2:38 PM
WoW! Brenda, In a few you created such a beautiful and romantic write. Well done. Have a fantastic weekend:-) Alexis
Chiri Avatar
November 16, 2019 at 9:42 PM
Alexis thank you so much!;)
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November 14, 2019 at 3:17 PM
Now sissy...remember what I told you about the birds & the bees lol...concentrate more on the flowers & the trees lol...but for now, I'll take your version of heaven...nice one sissy Bren...bro bro :o)
Chiri Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 7:28 AM
Now bro bro i try and try to keep the birds and bees in mind but seems I get distracted at times!;) thank you so much!;)
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November 14, 2019 at 9:14 AM
Nice one Brenda, lovely indeed!
Chiri Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 7:28 AM
Gordon thank you! Hope you have a great weekend !;)
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November 14, 2019 at 7:17 AM
Lovely. Keep writing. God bless you, Gina
Chiri Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 7:26 AM
Thank you Regina!;)
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November 14, 2019 at 5:08 AM
Another beauty:-) x
Chiri Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 7:26 AM
Elaine I really appreciate your kind words!;)
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November 13, 2019 at 7:00 PM
yummy poem!!!
Chiri Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 7:26 AM
Andrea thank you so much!;)
Anish Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 3:29 PM
Sexy little poem here! Good show! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Chiri Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 4:03 PM
Thank you Mathew! Much appreciated!;)
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November 13, 2019 at 1:43 PM
- A heavenly heaven, Brenda :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Chiri Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 1:47 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise I really appreciate your visit!;)
Na Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 1:11 PM
Hi Brenda. Thanks for sharing this. Each person has their own aspect of heaven and I loved yours.
Chiri Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 1:34 PM
Ahh Gregory thank you so much! ;)
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