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My Heartbeat - Lenore

She walks in Spirit
Through the threshold of my Heart
Everlasting LOVE

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Laura Breidenthal

February 13, 2012 at 8:33 PM

Such images! I too especially love the middle line. And the entire poem as a whole.. Always, Laura

Andrea Dietrich

November 23, 2010 at 6:23 PM

wonderful middle line. thru the threshhold of your heart!

Carolyn Devonshire

March 10, 2009 at 12:23 PM

Beautiful use of language to describe the feeling of true love, HGarvey. I was drawn to the title as Edgar Allen Poe's "Lenore" is one of my favorites. You have great talent; I'm a fan and you're going into my favorites. Thanks for your comments on my poems. I have just returned from a trip and it's good to be back on Poetry Soup again. Best wishes, Carolyn

Belinda Parish

March 9, 2009 at 8:58 PM

Excellent write, HGarvey. Beautiful.

Arany P.

March 9, 2009 at 7:49 AM

well written!! the second line is so beautiful!! lovely write there ~ Arany

Sharon Winter

March 9, 2009 at 5:50 AM

I am so thrilled to read your incredibly beautiful poetry again dear brother. And I thank you for the info on the recipe! I will research, but I am afraid if it turns out good, I will eat the entire thing and become instantly addicted! ~lol~ Hope you are all better. Have a beautiful day. Love you, Shar xoxo