My Heart You Took

I loved you from the start.
But you loved part.
You took my heart.
And made     ty art.
What can I say,
You were just that way.
I hope you have fun with 
Your brand new fling.
The clock still ticks. . .
"Ding,ding,ding".......
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Loving Iii Avatar
October 23, 2008 at 3:11 PM
i'd like to see you do more than kid stuff. like nature the world the things that are beautifull to you, besides boys and what they think. try. john
Bruso Avatar
October 22, 2008 at 6:39 PM
Cool poem! Let's see some more! Lonnie
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