My Heart You Freed

you pick me up when I am down your my smile when I frown the moon I once thought my friend plus my light when night does end the sizzle as the sun meets the ocean tickling my mind with silly notions the first thought I have when I wake my very last before sleep does take you wipe away the tears I've shed voice the words that need be said when I'm with you there is no limit in our world we're the perfect fit who I never thought I would need its my heart you've finally freed
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Wolf Avatar
August 28, 2019 at 5:12 PM
I read it as a prayer... much better than the standard stuff. Wonderful, in fact! :) gw
Chiri Avatar
August 28, 2019 at 8:24 PM
Lol Gershon it's a prayer I say each night! Haha! Thank you!;)
Green Avatar
August 28, 2019 at 11:31 AM
Love poetry at it's finest. I could feel the deep caring and affection in these lines today. Really nice Brenda.
Chiri Avatar
August 28, 2019 at 8:23 PM
Thx chris much appreciated!;)
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