My Heart Weeps

Theres a part of me that no one sees
Where my heart weeps
And my blood seeps
Like tears runnin' down my cheeks

As I'm thinkin' back to love that I've lost
'Cuz it's taken from me such great cost
I ask the Lord if He can afford
To take this burden off of my front porch

The pain I feel is so sureal
I almost welcome it 'cuz I cant deal
And the chemicals pull up my shield
But they're blocking my attempts to heal

The needle takes it's place on the throne
I look around, Im all alone
I have no place to call my own
I have no faith, I have no home

The future seems so so bleack
Am I sick? Or am I weak?
Can I get back on my own two feet?
Can I walk this road? Can I take the heat?

I miss the chaos I hate so much
I base my life on it, my crutch
My excuse to live as such
I only see what I can touch

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 6/11/2011 9:28:00 PM
i feel this one...deeply.
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Date: 6/2/2011 1:51:00 AM
Sal congratulations on your win in Pd's contest :) WN
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Date: 6/2/2011 12:53:00 AM
grats on your awesome contest entry Luv*Skat
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Date: 6/1/2011 7:42:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Sal. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 6/1/2011 7:15:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of p.d. Sal
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Date: 6/1/2011 5:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in P.D.'s contest Sal. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/1/2011 12:28:00 AM
sal!~ CONGRATULATIONS!! In my contest, and thank you for supporting my contest. I had a great time reading and judging every entry in my contest. Thanks for being among all my chosen winners. have a great one,.. Poet D
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Date: 5/31/2011 9:39:00 PM
congrats Sal on your excellent win tonight in this contest with this wonderful write luv..enjoy..
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Date: 5/31/2011 8:17:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Sal. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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