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My Heart Hoped

My heart hoped in something that could never be, an illusion of a life I wish was with her, as it reached out for that hope far away in that distant horizon, only the sun knew my hearts pain, yet still it reached for a star in the twilight sky, grasping only the still born air of that hope that she would love me as I loved her, but all I found in this field of my soul is a lonely iris that will never bloom.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/26/2010 8:08:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your most creative write tonight.. with luv..
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Date: 7/26/2010 6:36:00 PM
Thank you. Feels good to be welcomed.
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Date: 7/26/2010 4:20:00 PM
Welcome to the soup. cool write
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Date: 7/26/2010 4:46:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Efrain. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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