My Heart Flutters

I see her wink
  My heart flutters
She bats her eyelashes
  My knees are butter

Sultry, she strolls toward me
  O, sublime, supreme ecstasy --
She deigns to speak, "Prithee,
  Who you staring at, retiree?"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Michael Avatar
August 18, 2019 at 6:49 PM
Well, she's very expressive...that's a good sign...
Wolf Avatar
August 18, 2019 at 8:01 PM
Well, she is certainly expressive. Ha, ha. Hadn't thought of that angle. Thanks for the comment, Arturo. Best wishes, gw
Bauer Avatar
August 18, 2019 at 6:06 PM
ha! well done, gershon!
Wolf Avatar
August 18, 2019 at 8:00 PM
Glad it gave you a chuckle, Ilene. :) gw
Mcgee Avatar
August 18, 2019 at 3:31 PM
so cute Gershon...and oh, can be so true!
Wolf Avatar
August 18, 2019 at 8:00 PM
It sure can be true, Jeanne. Thanks for noting that. :) gw
Adams Avatar
August 18, 2019 at 12:45 PM
sometimes we read the body language wrong, or they are sending signals but afraid to admit...nice one my friend :) hugs
Wolf Avatar
August 18, 2019 at 1:06 PM
--Or sometimes the signals are meant for someone else... And that can be so embarrassing! ;) gw
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