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My Heart Flutters

I see her wink My heart flutters She bats her eyelashes My knees are butter Sultry, she strolls toward me O, sublime, supreme ecstasy -- She deigns to speak, "Prithee, Who you staring at, retiree?"

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Date: 8/18/2019 6:49:00 PM
Well, she's very expressive...that's a good sign...
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/18/2019 8:01:00 PM
Well, she is certainly expressive. Ha, ha. Hadn't thought of that angle. Thanks for the comment, Arturo. Best wishes, gw
Date: 8/18/2019 6:06:00 PM
ha! well done, gershon!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/18/2019 8:00:00 PM
Glad it gave you a chuckle, Ilene. :) gw
Date: 8/18/2019 3:31:00 PM
so cute Gershon...and oh, can be so true!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/18/2019 8:00:00 PM
It sure can be true, Jeanne. Thanks for noting that. :) gw
Date: 8/18/2019 12:45:00 PM
sometimes we read the body language wrong, or they are sending signals but afraid to admit...nice one my friend :) hugs
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/18/2019 1:06:00 PM
--Or sometimes the signals are meant for someone else... And that can be so embarrassing! ;) gw

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