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My Heart Fell Into the Sea

My Heart fell into the sea it floated above a wave it past a ship of many than drifted into a cave there were a pair of eyes that followed it to a reef greenish blue one brown their visit very-brief from the many a fallen man He swallowed the salty sea My heart began to pound Within seconds a golden key Above the sea he floats My heart led by the eyes The golden key awaits The fallen man now dies The key lies on his heart Eyes greenish blue one brown The key turns back the time Before the man has drowned My heart now beets as his The fallen man awakes He swims back to the ship The many cheer good sake

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Date: 12/6/2018 4:28:00 PM
Very descriptive well done my friend!
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Victoria Addino
Date: 12/10/2018 8:27:00 PM
Thank You so much for your supportive words
Date: 11/24/2018 9:46:00 PM
I could see it all! Nice job
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Victoria Addino
Date: 12/10/2018 8:27:00 PM
Thanks

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