My Heart Break and You

MY HEART BREAK AND YOU

My heart has been broken ever since
You said you could never love me

How could you say those 
Evil, cruel and callous things to me 
And expect me not to 
React the way I did?
That was the day my heart break began
Because of you and your 
Ruthless and uncaring ways
Every day I have looked into myself
And wondered what I did to deserve such a 
Kick to my heart and self esteem

Anguish and defeat overpowered my senses
Nothing felt right for what seemed like an eternity; the 
Day you said we had no future and walked out of my life

You decided I wasn’t good enough for you
Or was it you? who wasn’t good enough for me?
Understandably I was upset, but no more; I am done with my heart break and you.

*9/29/2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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July 27, 2015 at 10:08 PM
wonderful win
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July 24, 2015 at 7:47 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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July 25, 2015 at 5:44 AM
Thank You !
A  Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 4:34 PM
Carmen,, Congratulations on your awesome win. **SKAT**
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July 25, 2015 at 5:44 AM
Thank You !
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July 24, 2015 at 4:33 PM
Congratulations on your win a 7. Hugs Eve
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July 25, 2015 at 5:44 AM
Thank You !
Allison Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 1:14 PM
a heartfelt write Carmen I am sure many can relate to your words - congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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July 25, 2015 at 5:44 AM
Thank You !
Hamilton Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 10:39 AM
we fail if we try to control the object of our love. Often love is not reciprocated and hard though it can be one has to move on. If one does not or can not it can become a stalker situation thought provoking write Carmen congrats on placing hugs
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July 24, 2015 at 11:38 AM
Thank you !
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