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My Heart Beats For You

Walking aimlessly through the woods
Searching for that spot we once stood
Pouring out my heart and my tears
Reliving memories of those special years

Red and orange and purple from green
Rich autumn colors, a sight to be seen
The winds of change quickly blowing in
With it a new chapter will soon begin

Not ready to give up, I can't let go
Where am I headed, where will I blow
Lost without you, what am I to do
Darling, my heart is still beating for you

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Honestly J.T. Date: 10/30/2014 12:49:00 PM I can relate to this one. I really like this poem. Going to my favs -JT Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 10/30/2014 3:15:00 PM Thank you JT my friend......Tim

Maurice Yvonne Date: 10/29/2014 5:10:00 PM Beautiful sad write. Hope you are in good spirits. Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 10/29/2014 5:13:00 PM Yes I am my friend....I am just seeing a lot of death around so it has been on my mind... Cheers

Liam Mcdaid Date: 10/29/2014 3:01:00 PM sad touching yet very beautifully penned piece tim Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 10/29/2014 3:40:00 PM Thank you liam my friend...cheers

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 10/29/2014 8:16:00 AM Tender, touching and painful at the same time! The heart deserves to be rewarded with love! Only when it let go the past the future comes! Very beautifully written, dear Tim! Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 10/29/2014 3:47:00 PM We all have been there, my friend BUT one day, very soon, you will find someone able to obliterate the past and you will be so grateful for that! Tim Smith Date: 10/29/2014 3:39:00 PM Thank you my friend...It is not easy to let go......Tim

Casarah Nance Date: 10/28/2014 8:53:00 PM Where the wind will blow, the future will know, where the muses guide your poem, that's like coming home. Wonderful write Sweets, :) Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 10/28/2014 9:35:00 PM I want to go home.... Hugs Tim

Gary Bateman Date: 10/28/2014 7:55:00 PM Tim . . . Quite wonderful, quite emotional, quite sad, And Quite Well-Done!! Love is the driving force always. A "7" from me and this one's a FAV. Cheers and Spill Ink, Gary Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 10/28/2014 9:33:00 PM Thank you Gary...cheers Tim

Jan Allison Date: 10/28/2014 6:08:00 PM Wonderful emotional write Tim and i love the imagery - the winds of change blowing in - oh how I relate to that. Wish I could give it a 10 guess 7 will have to do:-) Hugs jan xxx Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/28/2014 6:27:00 PM :-) :-) :-) Jan xx Tim Smith Date: 10/28/2014 6:24:00 PM Thanks Jan....I'll settle for the seven but you'll have to give me three hugs to make up the difference...hugs Tim xxx

Doris Jamoner Date: 10/28/2014 4:24:00 PM Ahwwww lots of emotions flowing through this poem. Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 10/28/2014 4:53:00 PM Thank you Doris....hugs Tim

Eve Roper Date: 10/28/2014 4:01:00 PM Another poem a "7" will do can't see anything wrong with it again. Totally enjoy your writings. :) hugs eve Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 10/28/2014 4:04:00 PM Thank you my dear friend....hugs Tim

Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 10/28/2014 3:57:00 PM Ah Tim, are you missing Jan already? Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/28/2014 6:03:00 PM Hey I'm still around just in a different location but still on soup:-)hugs Jan xx Tim Smith Date: 10/28/2014 4:00:00 PM Of course :)

Charmaine Chircop Date: 10/28/2014 3:16:00 PM Some people are too special to forget Tim,especially when We have fond memories of them .Very sad and deep-Charma Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 10/28/2014 3:28:00 PM Thank you sweetie......hugs Tim

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/28/2014 2:48:00 PM - "My Heart Beats For You" ....... yeah, I knew that !!! :))) - A beautiful and romantic poem my friend Tim !!!! - Never give up love!!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 10/28/2014 2:51:00 PM Thank you my dear friend ....hugs Tim