Tim Smith Poet Rhyme

My Heart Beats For You

Walking aimlessly through the woods
Searching for that spot we once stood
Pouring out my heart and my tears
Reliving memories of those special years

Red and orange and purple from green
Rich autumn colors, a sight to be seen
The winds of change quickly blowing in
With it a new chapter will soon begin

Not ready to give up, I can't let go
Where am I headed, where will I blow
Lost without you, what am I to do
Darling, my heart is still beating for you

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Honestly J.T. October 30, 2014 at 12:49 PM I can relate to this one. I really like this poem. Going to my favs -JT Tim Smith October 30, 2014 at 3:15 PM Thank you JT my friend......Tim

Maurice Yvonne October 29, 2014 at 5:10 PM Beautiful sad write. Hope you are in good spirits. Tim Smith October 29, 2014 at 5:13 PM Yes I am my friend....I am just seeing a lot of death around so it has been on my mind... Cheers

Liam Mcdaid October 29, 2014 at 3:01 PM sad touching yet very beautifully penned piece tim Tim Smith October 29, 2014 at 3:40 PM Thank you liam my friend...cheers

Demetrios Trifiatis October 29, 2014 at 8:16 AM Tender, touching and painful at the same time! The heart deserves to be rewarded with love! Only when it let go the past the future comes! Very beautifully written, dear Tim! Demetrios Trifiatis October 29, 2014 at 3:47 PM We all have been there, my friend BUT one day, very soon, you will find someone able to obliterate the past and you will be so grateful for that! Tim Smith October 29, 2014 at 3:39 PM Thank you my friend...It is not easy to let go......Tim

Casarah Nance October 28, 2014 at 8:53 PM Where the wind will blow, the future will know, where the muses guide your poem, that's like coming home. Wonderful write Sweets, :) Tim Smith October 28, 2014 at 9:35 PM I want to go home.... Hugs Tim

Gary Bateman October 28, 2014 at 7:55 PM Tim . . . Quite wonderful, quite emotional, quite sad, And Quite Well-Done!! Love is the driving force always. A "7" from me and this one's a FAV. Cheers and Spill Ink, Gary Tim Smith October 28, 2014 at 9:33 PM Thank you Gary...cheers Tim

Jan Allison October 28, 2014 at 6:08 PM Wonderful emotional write Tim and i love the imagery - the winds of change blowing in - oh how I relate to that. Wish I could give it a 10 guess 7 will have to do:-) Hugs jan xxx Jan Allison October 28, 2014 at 6:27 PM :-) :-) :-) Jan xx Tim Smith October 28, 2014 at 6:24 PM Thanks Jan....I'll settle for the seven but you'll have to give me three hugs to make up the difference...hugs Tim xxx

Doris Jamoner October 28, 2014 at 4:24 PM Ahwwww lots of emotions flowing through this poem. Tim Smith October 28, 2014 at 4:53 PM Thank you Doris....hugs Tim

Eve Roper October 28, 2014 at 4:01 PM Another poem a "7" will do can't see anything wrong with it again. Totally enjoy your writings. :) hugs eve Tim Smith October 28, 2014 at 4:04 PM Thank you my dear friend....hugs Tim

Brenda Meier-Hans October 28, 2014 at 3:57 PM Ah Tim, are you missing Jan already? Jan Allison October 28, 2014 at 6:03 PM Hey I'm still around just in a different location but still on soup:-)hugs Jan xx Tim Smith October 28, 2014 at 4:00 PM Of course :)

Charmaine Chircop October 28, 2014 at 3:16 PM Some people are too special to forget Tim,especially when We have fond memories of them .Very sad and deep-Charma Tim Smith October 28, 2014 at 3:28 PM Thank you sweetie......hugs Tim

Anne-Lise Andresen October 28, 2014 at 2:48 PM - "My Heart Beats For You" ....... yeah, I knew that !!! :))) - A beautiful and romantic poem my friend Tim !!!! - Never give up love!!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Tim Smith October 28, 2014 at 2:51 PM Thank you my dear friend ....hugs Tim