My Heart

My heart warned me 
‘’I am so tired 
As a slave I worked 
Without rest till now 
But you beat and wounded me 
I will die soon’’
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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October 14, 2012 at 7:43 AM
So powerful dear J...you have such a natural talent..Juniper
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October 14, 2012 at 11:04 AM
thank you dear JL .jk
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June 18, 2012 at 1:21 AM
aww a great poem, thanks for all your kind comments on my poems, I appriciate it, it is great to encourage one another ehre on soup take care from diane
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June 18, 2012 at 3:06 AM
thanks .jk
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June 16, 2012 at 5:34 PM
JK, your heart will mend, you will see... i think a heart can take a "BEAT" plenty of times before it truly dies... enjoyed..xox~pd
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June 16, 2012 at 8:57 PM
thanks .jk
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June 16, 2012 at 6:59 AM
Two be born again Anu (Pun people with some truth which lay behind)! You feeling it? It's scary but true...once you truly step over...can't explain it...Many blessing and peace be to you and yours!
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June 16, 2012 at 7:34 AM
thanks.jk
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