My Heart

My heart warned me ‘’I am so tired As a slave I worked Without rest till now But you beat and wounded me I will die soon’’

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Juniper Lock

Date: 10/14/2012 7:43:00 AM

So powerful dear J...you have such a natural talent..Juniper

Jayachandran Chakrapany
Date: 10/14/2012 11:04:00 AM

thank you dear JL .jk

Diane Christian

Date: 6/18/2012 1:21:00 AM

aww a great poem, thanks for all your kind comments on my poems, I appriciate it, it is great to encourage one another ehre on soup take care from diane

Jayachandran Chakrapany
Date: 6/18/2012 3:06:00 AM

thanks .jk

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/16/2012 5:34:00 PM

JK, your heart will mend, you will see... i think a heart can take a "BEAT" plenty of times before it truly dies... enjoyed..xox~pd

Jayachandran Chakrapany
Date: 6/16/2012 8:57:00 PM

thanks .jk

Steven Henderson

Date: 6/16/2012 6:59:00 AM

Two be born again Anu (Pun people with some truth which lay behind)! You feeling it? It's scary but true...once you truly step over...can't explain it...Many blessing and peace be to you and yours!

Jayachandran Chakrapany
Date: 6/16/2012 7:34:00 AM

thanks.jk