My Heart

My heart overtakes me
Sadness covers my eyes so I cannot see
My heart desires to be free

My heart overtakes me
Loneliness and I sit under the weeping willow tree
My heart has sorrows deeper than the sea

My heart over takes me
Brokenhearted load too heavy to carry
My heart suffocating this is scary

My heart over takes me
Sacrifice screams frantically
My heart, my heart let me be…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 8/17/2011 8:22:00 AM
Hi Faizah. I am reading you again and enjoying. You could be the spokes person for alot of people, you do it so well. Take a break once in awhile from your pain, it will help you survive.
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Date: 7/25/2011 3:39:00 AM
my heart let me be that last line made me cry:( 7up
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Date: 5/29/2011 8:06:00 AM
"Loneliness and I sit under the weeping willow tree".That's a wonderful expression.This poem is beautifully sculptured! I really enjoyed the read.*hugs* Joseph
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Date: 5/28/2011 5:18:00 PM
Heartfelt write my poet friend... words from the heart make the best poems...MJF
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