My Heart

My Heart my heart lies broken at your feet. It is damaged beyond repair. Your love has left me

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Itumeleng Cangua

Date: 1/23/2025 4:32:00 AM

Straight to the point and well written.

Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 1/23/2025 4:45:00 AM

Thank you

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/22/2025 11:01:00 PM

Lost love. A popular theme. Well composed.

Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 1/22/2025 11:13:00 PM

Thank you Victor

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/22/2025 12:28:00 PM

a beautiful though sad theme in the use of this poetry form.

Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 1/22/2025 1:04:00 PM

Thanks Andrea. Appreciate your comment

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/22/2025 11:57:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your "My Heart" write. So sad but so true for many. Have a blessed day as you write away..................

Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 1/22/2025 12:02:00 PM

Thanks. You as well.

John Read

Date: 1/22/2025 10:21:00 AM

Hi Oliver, you sum up the feeling of a lost love perfectly.

Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 1/22/2025 12:02:00 PM

Hello John. Thanks