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My Heart

My Heart

my heart  
lies broken at
your feet. It is damaged
beyond repair. Your love has
left me

lost lovecinquain

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Itumeleng Cangua

January 23, 2025 at 4:32 AM

Straight to the point and well written.

Oliver Mckeithan

January 23, 2025 at 4:45 AM

Thank you

Victor Buhagiar

January 22, 2025 at 11:01 PM

Lost love. A popular theme. Well composed.

Oliver Mckeithan

January 22, 2025 at 11:13 PM

Thank you Victor

Andrea Dietrich

January 22, 2025 at 12:28 PM

a beautiful though sad theme in the use of this poetry form.

Oliver Mckeithan

January 22, 2025 at 1:04 PM

Thanks Andrea. Appreciate your comment

Paula Goldsmith

January 22, 2025 at 11:57 AM

I enjoyed reading your "My Heart" write. So sad but so true for many. Have a blessed day as you write away..................

Oliver Mckeithan

January 22, 2025 at 12:02 PM

Thanks. You as well.

John Read

January 22, 2025 at 10:21 AM

Hi Oliver, you sum up the feeling of a lost love perfectly.

Oliver Mckeithan

January 22, 2025 at 12:02 PM

Hello John. Thanks

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