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My Heart

My heart beats for me, like flapping wings of a bee. Because of you I am alive, you have given me my drive. My heart longs for you, our walks at morning's dew. Our love, you are my loving dove. My heart what can I say, I need a joy filled day. I need to have some fun, let's go play in the bright sun. Date Written: 12/21/2020 2 Place Curtains Of Your Heart Contest Judged:12/26/2020 Sponsored by: Chantelle Anne Cooke

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Unseeking Seeker

Date: 12/26/2020 9:57:00 PM

Simplistic beauty always shines! Congrats on your win!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/27/2020 7:11:00 AM

Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. I did not know, I had a win. It is an honor. Glad you like this write. Enjoy your day with blessings.................

Peter Dome

Date: 12/26/2020 12:27:00 PM

Beautiful. my kind of write, romantic. well done. Pete.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/26/2020 12:47:00 PM

Thank You, for writing. Glad you like this one. Enjoy your day/weekend with blessings.................

Beata Agustin

Date: 12/24/2020 7:43:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this. Meanwhile... Cheering you with blest Christmas spirit, while sharing you "... the gift of God is eternal life through Jesus Christ our Lord" (Romans 6:23 of the King James Bible). God bless you.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/26/2020 9:37:00 AM

I was off the computer. Thank You, for your note. Glad you like it. Enjoy your day/weekend with blessings.................

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 12/24/2020 7:31:00 AM

We all need this. God B L E S S you and Merry Christmas Eve.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/26/2020 9:36:00 AM

I was off the computer. Thank You, for your note. Glad you like this one. Enjoy your day/weekend with blessings.................

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/23/2020 12:54:00 PM

Hi Paula, It is a delight to read such a positive write. Have a nice day:-) Alexis

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/23/2020 1:08:00 PM

Thank You, for your note. Glad you like this one. Enjoy your day with blessings..................

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 12/22/2020 10:55:00 PM

As sweet as candy. Blessing to you, wishing you a Happy Christmas despite all the troubles around us. ~~

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/23/2020 12:35:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like this write. Merry Christmas and enjoy your day with blessings..................

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/22/2020 3:57:00 PM

Sweet as sugar, Paula! Festival Lights and Laughter, Gershon

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/23/2020 12:34:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like this one. Enjoy your day with blessings..................

Akkina Downing

Date: 12/22/2020 2:24:00 PM

Sweet and beautiful :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/23/2020 12:33:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Enjoy your day with blessings..................

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 12/22/2020 11:53:00 AM

Hi Paula, A real happy go lucky poem, - the beat of your heart and you go out in the sun to play. Quite a unique poem , well penned Paula, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/22/2020 12:46:00 PM

Thanks for your note and kind words. Enjoy your day with blessings and a hug..................

Jcb Brul

Date: 12/21/2020 6:21:00 PM

So lovely! It flows like music. More power and stay safe.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/22/2020 8:29:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like this one. Enjoy your day with blessings..............