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My Happy Place

When I close my eyes This world melts away Revealing to my surprise The world I left astray A low lit room Watching a stage A rocking tune And comedic craze The smell of cuisine Italian of the sort Croissants in between This I report Cool, crisp air Pure to my skin It is my happy place I want to come again

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/20/2010 11:13:00 PM
soup mail waiting--Charles Henderson
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Date: 8/20/2010 4:23:00 PM
Wow what words woven where wit was working!! Welcome with wonder!!
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Date: 8/20/2010 10:32:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today Billy. I enjoyed reading your writing this morning. I am hoping you have a wonderful weekend and find loads of inspiration along the way. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/19/2010 9:37:00 PM
This poem, I found really inspiring! I honestly don't like to comment on anybody's work because all poetry is usually the same, on love, death, etc etc, even mine sometimes, but I try to be different, your poem made me feel like I need to find a place like this! Thanx....Copeland
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Date: 8/19/2010 8:03:00 PM
nice one,, enjoyed your write..P.D.
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