My Happy Place

When I close my eyes
This world melts away
Revealing to my surprise
The world I left astray
A low lit room
Watching a stage
A rocking tune
And comedic craze
The smell of cuisine
Italian of the sort
Croissants in between
This I report
Cool, crisp air
Pure to my skin
It is my happy place
I want to come again
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Henderson Avatar
August 20, 2010 at 11:13 PM
soup mail waiting--Charles Henderson
Culverhouse Avatar
August 20, 2010 at 4:23 PM
Wow what words woven where wit was working!! Welcome with wonder!!
Brown Avatar
August 20, 2010 at 10:32 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today Billy. I enjoyed reading your writing this morning. I am hoping you have a wonderful weekend and find loads of inspiration along the way. Love, Carol
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August 19, 2010 at 9:37 PM
This poem, I found really inspiring! I honestly don't like to comment on anybody's work because all poetry is usually the same, on love, death, etc etc, even mine sometimes, but I try to be different, your poem made me feel like I need to find a place like this! Thanx....Copeland
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August 19, 2010 at 8:03 PM
nice one,, enjoyed your write..P.D.
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