My Happy Evening

The warm evening on the sand
I enjoy the sunset while holding your hand

So beautiful is the scenery
Even if there is no greenery

Around us children run and play
I cannot remember if it is weekday 

Or could it be sunday
I am mesmerized by the alleyway

You and me so in love 
I feel like a little dove

When you do ask me with a ring
If I will be your wife so adoring

I become so lost and dreamy
And say yes with a voice so steamy

Oh! so much joy and happiness
Would leave even Shakespeare breathless!

Anoucheka Gangabissoon
November 5 2011
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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November 30, 2011 at 1:02 PM
Thank you for your kind comments on my writing. They are very much appreciated Anoucheka. Love, Carol
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