My Happiness Title

My brain power has surely diminished Since reaching this ripe old age Used to be sharp as a tack back then During my mind's early stages Where'd they go, the years have just flown Yesterday, I was young and eager Today, my happy dreams have come true But I'm still a knowledge seeker Can never get enough of this great big world With it's magic and secrets untold Our brains can hold so much new knowledge Experiencing the future unfold Sadly we eventually must all say goodbye To the world and our friends so vital Okay that's enough of this negative whoohaa It's contrary to my happiness title
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Hankins Avatar
July 6, 2022 at 10:03 AM
Each line is a truth about yourself, Jack. None of it "negative whoohaa" as I see it.
Ellison Avatar
July 6, 2022 at 3:57 PM
That would explain it my friend! Tom experienced a 42c temps while there!!! Guess he will welcome his British temps again!
Hankins Avatar
July 6, 2022 at 3:17 PM
Jack, lots of folks are on vacation, etc. Tom is in Turkey, so I don't hear from him when he's out of country. I think a lot of folks are traveling right now. Anyway, I'm here! Wa-hoo!
Ellison Avatar
July 6, 2022 at 2:10 PM
BTW my readership has dropped off dramatically in the recent month or so! Is it general throughout the site or yours truly in particular! Maybe I'm just being paranoid????
Ellison Avatar
July 6, 2022 at 1:36 PM
Thought I would be pretty close! Don't know how much longer I can last but I'll give it my best shot! Thank you Milton, my good friend!!!
Kelly Avatar
July 6, 2022 at 6:04 AM
Jack, A poem easy to relate and good flow and easy to read. thanks for a a look in reality.
Ellison Avatar
July 6, 2022 at 6:17 AM
Very nice tribute to my effort to describe my path through life. Much appreciated Patrick!
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