My Hands

once again lies before me the pieces of my shattered life once more i will begain to pick up the the shatterd bits and and build up anew from the wreckage that lies before me with each crushed damaged broken fallen piece my hands replace each piece of fallen hope broken dreams a shatterd heart and a torchered soul my hands will mend the the path of pain that lies before me

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 4/19/2009 5:56:00 AM

This poem has a nice positive overtone. Healing after emotional pain can mend just as you have said in this poem. I like the line "...my hands will mend the path of pain" It makes me think about how serving others helps us loose our own paing. Very nice work. Keep writing. God Bless you. And welcome to Poetry Soup. Love, Dane