My Haiku Has Hit New Standard

My Haiku Has Hit New Standard

My poems should remain
Safe and Sound, secure and sane
Pure, simple and plain.

More my brain does move
You a message will behoove
Poems they can improve.

My poems are plenty
Both of my eyes are squinty
Saw immunity.

Poems new standard set
Even also better yet
You and them have met.

Memories poems make
And breath away they will take
World started to shake

Great my poems became
And me you will have to blame
So read more of same.

James Horn
Retired Veteran and Poet
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Callus Avatar
December 27, 2016 at 9:11 AM
That's how poetry ought to be, James...pure, simple and plain! May your muse always keep you pleasant company. Best regards // paul
Horn Avatar
December 27, 2016 at 9:29 AM
I love having to be haunted by poets who like you are undaunted and incredible. jth
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