My Haiku

Overwhelming pain 
How can I just walk away?
With my head held high
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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January 29, 2012 at 11:09 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Margarita. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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January 29, 2012 at 10:29 AM
Simple, but very clear. Could you put the "?" after "high"? Seems it would make the point even more so...anyway, enjoyed by me.
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January 28, 2012 at 10:36 PM
Margarita, it's hard to walk with head high.. but, you can do it... enjoyed stopping by to read your poem..pd
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